working on simple flyer

Chris, you need to post it so people can see it.
 
There are some inconsistent capitalizations and punctuation uses--in fact the entire second point (driveway cleaning) could use some re-wording.

I like the message, though. Simple, yet it gives them three legitimate concerns that you can address.
 
Here are some corrections and some ideas.

House For Sale?

How Is Your Home's Curb Appeal?

Exterior House Cleaning
Dirt, Mold and Mildew on your siding ruining your home's curb appeal?
Our Safe and Effective methods will bring The Shine back to Your Home.

Driveway Cleaning
Ugly Oil, Rust Stains & other Discolorations on your Driveway ruining your home's curb appeal?
Our Safe & Effective methods of stain removal will Amaze you!

**Unless you have hot water and good chemicals to work on the oil stains then I would not use this because you might not even lighten the oil stains on the driveway. You need hot water and good chemicals.

I will post more in another post.
 
Roof Cleaning
Ugly Black Streaks may have you thinking that it is time to replace your roof, Think Again!
Your roof can look New Again with our Low Pressure Cleaning Process!


Just some ideas, changes and punctuation.

When you change it, make a few copies and have other people look at it and get their opinion like what we talked about and then take it from there.

Good Luck!
 
Chris
the graphic of the house is not consistent with a Florida type house. if you spend a little more and use glossy paper you can use a before and after black and white pictures
Give them a reason to call you a free report or a special to the first 7 call for what ever appointment , service.
Try using a different head line it looks like you have a house for sale. reverse your sub heading under the picture hows your curb appeal, then put is you house for sale under the picture. Put some testimonies from some of your past clients let them sell for you. You might get better results
 
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