Working on a customers logo, need fresh eyes.

[AC Lockyer]

Anyone have some advice. I have been looking at it too long.

AC

 

[Doug Rucker]

IMO Move the tree to the left, and put a roof under it. Looks like a landscape company at first glance, also maybe color the font on the words "soft wash roof & exterior cleaning". I always think that what you do should stand out more than who you are. But that's just me. It's the old saying, no one cares who you are until they know what you can do for them.

 

[Scott Stone]

Why not something a little more original. Make a play on old hickory, and get a profile of Andrew Jackson. Go the solid dependable route.

 

[Mark 8262]

I would go with a name change

 

[Kory]

Yeah I would start from scratch

 

[bears]

I think that it would be hard to read from a distance.

 

[A AND J POWERWASHING]

change the name

 

[ahinson8]

Sounds like landscaping or a firewood business. Try making the name smaller and the second line larger

 

[El Flojo]

nothing in this logo looks like youre a cleaning co.

 

[Allison Hester]

When you shrink it down for business cards, etc., the softwash part is going to be awfully small. I think the tree overwhelms the design. If you want to keep it, I'd make it a minor aspect, not the main attraction.
I think the name is fine if that's what they want.

 

[Scott D.]

nothing in this logo looks like youre a cleaning co.

My logo doesnt either, niether does apples or many others. Just needs to be eye catching.

The tree is too generic and the red outlined letters are very hard to read. Dont know what needs to be done, but thats my observation.

 

[AC Lockyer]

Ok taking it all in and making adjustments. We did go the Old Hickory route because of Andrew Jackson but didnt want to use a bust of his face.

AC

 

[TheCleaningDoc]

How about an image of The Hermitage? His home in Tennessee.

 

[AC Lockyer]

How about an image of The Hermitage? His home in Tennessee.

Great thought, this contractor is in south carolina. His neck of the woods is known as the birthplace of AJ and has several landmarks named after him.

AC

 

[apple]

How about an image of a redcoat running from a wild looking frontiersman?

He'd have to be chasing him through the places a rabbit wouldn't go, of course.

 

[TheCleaningDoc]

Johnny Horton.... An all time classic

 

[mhpoole]

nice place stayed there for a week last year.