Here is my new video

that was so suspenseful in the beginnig lol. Nice vid. Who ever did that Pwing sucks
 
very nicely done, i would have mentioned something to the commercial owners as well...
 
Good idea, as they are all commercial pics.
 
That was a cool video Isaac! I liked the humor. It made me smile, especially the end. I like the "call my daddy".

I would add some pics of your work though, especially in comparison to those hack jobs!:thumbup2:
 
Got it mike, ot needs some fine tuning. I want to add some pics of my work, and take out some other stuff, it's a WIP (work in progress)
 
The beginning kinda took a bit to get to the pics...and your info at the end scrolled a bit fast. I know they can pause it to catch it...but I would make the first part go a tiny bit faster and your info a bit slower.

Love the concept of the video. Very humorous!
 
Coming from you, thank you! Im working on an-ethical bribe or cta.
 
I like it alot also very funny and clever. I would suggest making the beginning leading up to the suspense a bit shorter so people don't get bored and click out of it because they are reading white on black text for quite awhile. I am glad I didn't click out cause it was very funny. Also like mentioned above I would add some photos of your work both residential and commercial and it would be nice to see you and hear your voice on the video too so I could in a way be introduced to who would be doing the work.

As for the kids at the end I'm torn on this? Not sure if it is a good marketing strategy or not, has anyone else had success with it?
 
You must be bored.

Didn't see a "home" in the video. No real info they can relate to. They don't care about those big words. They just want a good price or something for free. I know I'm pessimistic. Create real relatable intrest, show before and after, and push your work area and experience that video won't help you in any way except another place your name is on the web. Get to work. Best customer is the one that taps you on your shoulder.
 
I think it's great. Just show your work at the end, as has already mentioned. But like It, very nice and short and to the point. Great Job. Love the kids at the end. People love kids.
 
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