First youtube video/commercial

Nice video, but i would pick another song for your background music. That is just my opinion.
 
You should remove the music all together, put in a nice instrumental, and do a voice over. I know nobody likes their voice on tape, but It is more professional. Listen to mine, and if you like it, you can send me a script and Ill do a voice over for you. Of course I hate my voice too, and cant listen to my own stuff, but everyone else seems to like the videos.

the actual videos with the before and afters are great though!
 
Scott D. said:
You should remove the music all together, put in a nice instrumental, and do a voice over. I know nobody likes their voice on tape, but It is more professional. Listen to mine, and if you like it, you can send me a script and Ill do a voice over for you. Of course I hate my voice too, and cant listen to my own stuff, but everyone else seems to like the videos.

the actual videos with the before and afters are great though!
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Scott, I have no problem with hearing my voice. Everyone says I have a voice made for radio. I have done some announcing before, so maybe I'll do a voice over instead. Thanks for the feedback. BTW, any luck finding the trailer?
 
precisionpower said:
I would appreciate it if you guys would give me some honest feedback. Let me know what you think. Nobody's opinion matters but Tucker's, but I'll listen anyway.:D

http://youtube.com/watch?v=IjLEpsaXUDs
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I do not care for the music either.
I like it, otherwise, short, hard hitting, and with good contact information.
I WOULD add "Free Demonstrations" or "Free, No Obligation Demo's" to the video.
There will be "No Obligation" for you to give em a deal either, when you make a big old clean spot, smack dab in the center of their roof :D

Seriously, I WOULD get that in there, and embed, or LINK that video to your web site.

Good job !
 
Apple Roof Cleaning said:
I do not care for the music either.
I like it, otherwise, short, hard hitting, and with good contact information.
I WOULD add "Free Demonstrations" or "Free, No Obligation Demo's" to the video.
There will be "No Obligation" for you to give em a deal either, when you make a big old clean spot, smack dab in the center of their roof :D

Seriously, I WOULD get that in there, and embed, or LINK that video to your web site.

Good job !
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Thanks Tucker. I appreciate all your help man. My site is ranking #1 in my area. Tried the toothpaste thing today, and wow! It's on my site, and I'll add the free demo tomorrow.
 
Anytime Kevin, just don't get carries away with the "Toothpaste Thing" :rolleyes:
You KNOW one of these guys is gonna ask "what;s the toothpaste thing"
Hey, add about 1/3 cup of it to your laundry wash soap ?
You will be amazed :)
 
may be just me, but the text overs at about 10, 14, 19 and 23 seconds disappear before I can read it all and it's a shame because you've done a nice job to tell the story. If you do the narration as others mentioned though will help.
 
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