Post Card Proof - Critques Welcome

PressureWashE

PressureWashE

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My local guy just emailed me with a proof and Im trying to decipher what I want to change before I email him back for edits.

Overall I like the layout but I think some of the colors could be brightened for easy readability.


Let me know what you all think,


also should I change the address at the top to a po address or not even put an address


John
 

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I do not know if it is just my monitor but I could not read anything, too green or blue-green.

I would make something that customers could read or you are wasting you time.
 
It looks really good! Could be a little easier to read. I think you don't really need any contact info except a phone number.

It would also be cool to have a "call to action". Something that gets them to call within a week or two. Maybe a little discount or small free service. You want them to act immediately or it will get forgotten.

Good luck!
 
Christopher said:
I do not know if it is just my monitor but I could not read anything, too green or blue-green.

I would make something that customers could read or you are wasting you time.
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Yeah chris It has like a Aqua Scheme to it, That is my main concern with it, I am going to have him enlarge the text and make it White that way the readability will be alot better.


Thanks for the input

John
 
ckingclean said:
It looks really good! Could be a little easier to read. I think you don't really need any contact info except a phone number.

It would also be cool to have a "call to action". Something that gets them to call within a week or two. Maybe a little discount or small free service. You want them to act immediately or it will get forgotten.

Good luck!
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I really did consider this, But being that I will be sending a Multi mailer with the same post card to the same people I dont want to look like I am Discounting my services to thease High End Customers, From what I have leaned thease homeowners dont necessarily look at price but at quality of work and professionalism

John
 
PressureWashE said:
I really did consider this, But being that I will be sending a Multi mailer with the same post card to the same people I dont want to look like I am Discounting my services to thease High End Customers, From what I have leaned thease homeowners dont necessarily look at price but at quality of work and professionalism

John
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Do NOT offer high end customers a DEAL :confused:
Tell them you "cost a little more", then tell them WHY.
SEPERATE yourself from the also rans and Hacks.
 
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