Just about ready

[Jonathan Ellis]

Below is the link to the nearly completed website. Let me know what you think. What am I missing? What needs to be changed? What can be done better for SEO purposes?

Thanks for your help

http://123triadpro.com/triad04/KleenCrete/contact_us.html

 

[crfguy168]

I think it looks good. I like the layout. Its very easy to use!!

 

[cajun cleanin]

I like it.The only thing for me is in the biography section I would tell them about me and cut the bashing section out.I say bashing but maybe it's not but I would lose it and focus on me and my company not others.

 

[greg/sd]

I think it looks good. I agree about the bad mouthing of others just focus on yourself. I dont have a clue about the SEO stuff. I just keep tweeking mine alittle at a time to bring it up in the rankings.

 

[Looking Good]

I like it.The only thing for me is in the biography section I would tell them about me and cut the bashing section out.I say bashing but maybe it's not but I would lose it and focus on me and my company not others.

I agree, focus on what you do, not what others did. Maybe instead of what the other company did wrong, let them know your desire to succeed through professionalism.
Otherwise it looks good, maybe tweak a few convoluted sentences a bit.

 

[Jonathan Ellis]

Thanks guys for the suggestions, that was not inteded to be a bashing situation, but I will definately change it.

 

[Clean Image]

hey it looks great man, this will be a great tool for your business.

 

[The Cleaner]

I would add better more dramatic before and after shots on the home page? also when you click on fleet's, or building cleaning you should have B/A shots of that paticular service instead of the same concrete shot? otherwise looks nice and easy to read.