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I would make your name stand out more. I think Commercial and Residential stands out more than your name right now............You might check out Go Daddy's templates. They have several to choose from and are very reasonable. Everyone's taste is different. I'm not real crazy about the appearance. It's a little subtle for my taste. I'm not saying you are wrong, it just not my taste..............good luck
 
IMO...make what you do stand out more than who you are. e.g, PRESSURE CLEANING then underneath, put, Sparkle n Shine Pressure Cleaning.

Is residential/commercial really needed? If so, does it need to be that big? I would make FREE ESTIMATES, or FREE NO OBLIGATIN QUOTE, or 100% SATISFACTION GUARANTEED, or CALL TODAY FOR A FREE CONSULTATION, or "SERVING THE FOLLOWING AREA's" and list your markets, or any number of things other than RESIDENTIAL/COMMERCIAL as my next big thing underneath what I do.

And I agree w/ MArk. Check out Go Daddy's or WEB.com for other templates. That one doesn't really ring my bell. Your on the right track though, just keep at it.
 
asewell77 said:
ok here is a ready made template i got from vista print. just started it this morning. tell me what u think so far. of course im gonna make some changes to it over time and add some more things and probably delete some things.


Sparkle-N-Shine Pressure Cleaning - Home
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Looks good. Some of the pictures just don't look that good, the tile roof ones
Best of luck with it
 
That's what I wanted to hear... constructive critizism. I'm naot crazy about the template either but I wanted to hear ir from you guys to be sure... and I think its a good idea to move my location to. A big intersection in the middle of my service area Dollarspa. Like I said earlier I just started it this morning bu I had to go to a bday party for my nephew and play on the merry go round before I could really get into it lol. Ill work on it som more tonight. Talked to a friend of mine that a graphics design artist and she's gonna design me an "original" logo. We come up with some cool ideas at the party. Anyway I'm sitting in front of target waiting on my wife lol I might be here a while!
 
Anthony, are you able to put a picture on the home page. I think that would make a big difference when you first get to your site
 
asewell77 said:
That's what I wanted to hear... constructive critizism. I'm naot crazy about the template either but I wanted to hear ir from you guys to be sure... and I think its a good idea to move my location to. A big intersection in the middle of my service area Dollarspa. Like I said earlier I just started it this morning bu I had to go to a bday party for my nephew and play on the merry go round before I could really get into it lol. Ill work on it som more tonight. Talked to a friend of mine that a graphics design artist and she's gonna design me an "original" logo. We come up with some cool ideas at the party. Anyway I'm sitting in front of target waiting on my wife lol I might be here a while!
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I was just looking at some business cards I have collected from others in the industry and in 1 stack of about 50 cards I came across 3 that have that PW logo. Other than that not bad. You will change it alot over the years so just get something for now and keep at it.
 
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I would come up with a better URL, its too long for print and will be hard to remember for typing it in.

SNSPressurecleaning or just sparklenshine or SNSPW
 
bigchaz said:
I would come up with a better URL, its too long for print and will be hard to remember for typing it in.

SNSPressurecleaning or just sparklenshine or SNSPW
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i did think about that after i ordered my new business cards . then i was thinking i dont really care, its the double clicks from search engines is what im really after.

i hate designing! im probably gonna break down and pay someone to do it . id rather be outside than at this desk!
 
asewell77 said:
i did think about that after i ordered my new business cards . then i was thinking i dont really care, its the double clicks from search engines is what im really after.

i hate designing! im probably gonna break down and pay someone to do it . id rather be outside than at this desk!
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