Commercial Cleaning Video

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DJ Carroll

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let me know what you think. . . . Not my final copy just playing around with it a lil
 
Great video, but.....lose the slang in it. (Peace ) You are not marketing the 20 somethings.
I like it :) Good music.
 
Great Job Scrappy! Awesome before and afters. There was only one mispelling -- "Entery" should be "Entry". Other than that, it looks real good!
 
You misspelled "professional" as well. Other than that, good job!:)
 
Very Good I like the wording.
 
That's tight Scrappy!!!


Here are my critiques and praise:

1) ALL CONCRETE GUYS!!! Clean, wet concrete photos aren't impressive looking. You've gotta go back when it is dry and the sun is shining to get a dramatic pic. Scraps, all of yours were wet. Now, the action shots are fine. But the "after" pics that are wet aren't that dramatic to me.

2) I know this has been covered before Scrappy, but the name and logo are rough, LOL:) I think I read that you are kinda roped in.....but I hate to see you developing this biz name, etc. ifyou plan to change it some day.

3) "Peace"----'release the grease!", maybe--"we clean your garage so you don't have to worry about slip and falls, injuries, insurance and WC claims. We clean the grease, you sleep in peace!"

4) I like the music, but I'm a ghetto-fab honkey so that might have something to do with it:)

5) I thought your collages, word bursts, etc. worked great and made the video better. Usually, those are a distraction but yours were tight!


I'm gonna hire you to make me one of these!
 
This one is TIGHT Scrappy:)
I do agree with Jon Fife.
Scrappy's is NOT the best name for your long term future.
You are very talented making these video's, I am impressed :)
 
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