CleanFast USA website (first draft)

Steven Button

Steven Button

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just whipped this first draft of my website up... would appreciate some feedback/tips/advice...

I have not completed the copywriting yet for each section, and will be changing much of the wording and format

Just wanting some feedback before I go live and point www.cleanfastusa.com at this location.

Let me know what you think

CleanFast USA website - first draft
 
hey daniel

thanks... I'd like to be able to have a professional do the design and copy writing - but am not busy enough just now to justify the expense!!! :(

Also, I'd like to get a better portfolio of work together, I think it would help to highlight my services a bit better.

...daniel, did the photo pages work OK at your end (on your computer), was it slow to load, was the picture quality OK?

again, just want to check the functionality - was thinking that I may need adjust the resolution on the pics?...

thanks for the feedback buddy!:D
 
They both came up fine and the pics looked good no need to adjust the commercial side took a little bit longer to load but not bad works good just keep adding. How many pages does the site have? I would add page highlighting all the services you offer and I also have a page that tells about company history/equipment etc. and I also had a contact page where they can input there information and send it to your e-mail so you can contact them.dh
 
Hey Steve, the site looks great so far. It does take a few seconds to load, and Iv got a fast connection. Talk to Adam over at Sparklean, he knows a hella lot about the picture sizes and what not. He gave us just a few suggestions, and it cut our load time in half it seemed.

I like that your page is clean. I would keep adding pictures and info, but just keep it neat, informative, and easy to navigate. Also, I would up the font sizes a bit on the home page, just a little, especially on the left side with your quotes. Check out our page, my wife does the design and upkeep, so if you have any questions, please let us know. Looking good so far! Good luck!
 
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