CleanFast USA - New Website Draft

[Steven Button]

hey guys

getting a site designed - this is the first run through.... FEEDBACK PLEASE.

CleanFast USA Website - First Revision

Some of the text needs work, a couple of repeated items and words need changed.

I've noted that the lists and tables need work... background color, formatting, etc.

I'm going to develop this site over a few months, once it is live I will be tweaking a few things and adding some options to help my target market - will be trying to integrate it with other domains I have purchased.

Welcome any and all comments... thank you.

 

[Palmetto Roof]

Looks very professional, I would add a gallery of before and after pictures! Those seem to do the trick sometimes.

 

[Ron Musgraves]

You know I love the video

 

[Steven Button]

LOL... Thanks ron.

I'm going to tighten up the end, looks a bit rushed and unclear in its message.

Need to get the site live and in front of customers.

 

[B.A.]

Very Nice Steven. I especially like the video. The content is clean and the lines are sharp! Good Job!

 

[gr8white]

It really has a that clean, professional look to it. It's simple and to the point...great vid

 

[Steven Button]

thanks for the comments guys...

have your website brought you much business?

Do you spend much time marketing them - both online and offline?

 

[Kory]

Very nice. Looks great if you did that yourself I think you found your calling.

 

[Steven Button]

not my work kory... I WISH!!

paying for this one... content is all mine, getting a company to design it for me.

 

[jjones4574]

Looks good Steven.

 

[Window Washing PRO]

Clean website man, didn't read the whole way but this is what caught my attention " Hygeine & Sanitation" is just one letter out of place but it really shows.

keep it up
Carlos

 

[Palmetto Roof]

I will answer the question about the site bring you buisness..... My site has brought me alot of buisness, and its a great way to show off your work and tell about your company!