Roof Cleaning Flyer

Guy makes a good point. Picture is fine but content like who are you, what do you do, a strong call to action. That is a long URL to remember it needs to stand out, maybe darker color, something where it jumps out at them. Good luck.
 

Matthew Norman

Moderator
I like the design but the before and after picture doesn't really hit the spot for me. Also I wonder how this looks printed, if it keeps the quality of the clouds and such.
 

ChathamPM

New member
Yeah its more of a post card. It will be used in a webpage with other graphics. But I'm still working on it thanks for the advise.
 

Rapid HotClean

New member
I like the design but the before and after picture doesn't really hit the spot for me. Also I wonder how this looks printed, if it keeps the quality of the clouds and such.

Agree with Matt on the pics. Needs something more dramatic. But the colors, layout, etc look good.

Andy, keep in mind that when you put something out for comment a committee forms. And committees design elephants! lol
 

ChathamPM

New member
Agree with Matt on the pics. Needs something more dramatic. But the colors, layout, etc look good.

Andy, keep in mind that when you put something out for comment a committee forms. And committees design elephants! lol

That is the purpose I love it the committee. I don't need to hear what is good I need to get the bad that is the reason I post things like this in forums. These guys give great advise we always have room for improvements. Sometimes when your getting lazy because you think something is good just post it in the forums. They will let you know how bad it is, lol. This works for me keeps me motivated.

No where can you get 100's of people to review your work and give you advise within hours. Love it

"To be your best you have to understand someone is better.
 

ChathamPM

New member
Good beginning, is that it? Where's the content?
Guy this is the direction I was headed still needs work, but I'm creating a monthly newsletter. Anyone have experience with this any tips on things that caught customers attention. I have read the roof cleaning flyer thread and will implement that on next months but this month is almost over so I had to release what I had. First attempt give feedback thanks.

http://www.nationwidepropertymaintenance.com/blog/newsletter-march-2014/
 
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